Hey Eden,
The content in your profile is good, but you are wasting a lot of space at the beginning of your overview/summary. When clients search for freelancers, only the first 200-225 characters of your summary are shown. This means you have very little space (approximately two short sentences) to get their attention. You want clients to see their goals (your services and success) in this small space. You are filling this space with emojis and unnecessary text.
Clients come to Upwork with specific needs and they look for freelancers who can meet those needs and get results. Your profile summary will be more engaging if you use a conversational tone to tell clients about your services, how you can help them, and why they should choose you. For example:
I am an accomplished Data Analyst with 5 years of experience collecting and analyzing data to help businesses make informed decisions. I can help you leverage structured and unstructured data to drive business decisions and solve complex problems.
I have worked with big brands like Pakistan Super League, and served automated systems to several companies to generate data for their inventory management and accounting systems. I use R, Python, Power BI, SQL, Google Sheets, Microsoft Excel, Tableau, Oracle, and Mongo DB to proofread and edit data documentation, create spreadsheets and reports, and build data visualizations to help you better understand, analyze, and communicate complex information. (After this, you can offer your list of value:) Why choose me? ◉ 5 years of experience as a Senior Data Analyst ◉ 24/7 Availability ◉ 100% Client Satisfaction ◉ Save $10 on your first order |
You can change this as you see fit, but the general idea is to immediately tell clients how you can help them. You only have 200-225 characters to convince them, and clients are more interested in their goals (your services and success) than anything else.
Here are some other ways you can enhance your summary:
- Tell clients how you will communicate and gather feedback to ensure the final deliverables meet their needs.
- Mention that you stay informed of the latest developments, trends, and emerging technologies in data science and machine learning.
- Talk about how you can uphold ethical standards, protect proprietary data/information, and use responsible practices for data collection and analysis.
- Highlight any data management projects you have worked on with Pakistan Super League or another client, and your accomplishments.
- Talk about your ability to meet business challenges and adapt to changing or new requirements if necessary.
Also, I think you should find a way to include Data Analysis in your skills list since it is highly relevant to your services.
The other information in your profile looks good.
Good luck!
