Contemplation

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Generally, contemplation is persuaded as a meditative process, but this is just a combination of concentration, active listening and figurative thinking. I love this process and its practicing.

[allpurposewriter · Accepted solution]

That's very confusing. Could you write that in an active voice, instead of a passive voice? In so many words, there's no subject in the sentence "contemplation is persuaded as a meditative process."  

Who is doing the persuading? Further, contemplation is a  form or fashion of thinking -- generally thinking quietly. A style of thinking or a form of thinking cannot be persuaded of anything -- it's just a form of thinking. It's not a sentient entitty. 

You then wrote, "this is just a combination of concentration, active listening and figuarative thinking." But you don't have anything that tells us what "this" is. Is it the contemplation, the persuading or the meditative process? It's decidedly unclear.

[rekasesh]

Corporate babble, I'd say. 

[allpurposewriter]

Maybe.